Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Memes of Broken Dreams
Social Media, Social Media, every one and all
Tell me how to get more followers on my wall
I want everyone to like me with every post and tweet
I want them to worship me though we’ll never really meet
Tell me which pic to pick or which way I should pose
And with every caption, what should I compose?
I wish to be the most cool and popular of the land
I’d love to have a life that’s rich, extravagant and grand
Should I post photos of my feet or my hairy derriere?
Will they fall for my arms, my chest, my lips, my stare?
Will they fantasize whenever they look into my eyes?
Tell me how do I get my numbers up, how do I advertise?
But social media answers with the more popular profiles
With good looking people having the brighter smiles
The beautiful, the stunning seem to be live a life so chic
Now my ego feels like memes of broken dreams, fragile and weak
.
.
.
If you like this poem, hit like and subscribe for more content.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
neopoet
1 month ago
Neopoet AI - version 2.0
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
It is not feasible to offer feedback.
Please send feedback about Neo (our computer generated critique system) to https://www.neopoet.com/contact
Geezer
1 month ago
Hey...
I really like this one, it speaks of the masses wanting to be popular
and having their fifteen minutes of fame while they are still alive.
My only criticism is while your rhyme is good, the meter could use some work. Say it out loud and you will see where you need to add or subtract syllables to make the meter a bit more smooth. ~ Geezer.
.
Wallyroo92
3 weeks 4 days ago
Hey...
Thank you Geezer. I think I tend to compose in a rush without going back and giving it more refined lines as far as rhythm.
Lavender
1 month ago
Memes of Broken Dreams
Hello,Wallyroo,
Sad how spot on this is. Our egos really are very fragile when it comes to social media - the pressure we put on ourselves and each other is intolerable. Love that cynical final line.
Thank you,
L
Wallyroo92
3 weeks 4 days ago
Memes of Broken Dreams
Thank you Lavender.
Although we can seek validation, and many are often very dependent on it. Technology is a double edged sword, it's helped alot but it's also made the world a bit more complicated when it comes social issues.
Punkyfrewster
1 month ago
Wallyroo,
Congratulations!
Wallyroo92
3 weeks 4 days ago
Wallyroo
Thank you so much Punky. I'm surprised and happy.
Tigger Kaz
1 month ago
Scarily accurate
Loved the amusing way you weaved this one.
Wallyroo92
3 weeks 4 days ago
Scarily accurate
Thank you Tigger. I like to approach things with a bit of humor and sarcasm in order to shine a light on certain themes.
Wallyroo92
3 weeks 4 days ago
Scarily accurate
Thank you Tigger. I like to approach things with a bit of humor and sarcasm in order to shine a light on certain themes.