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loved
loved
Dec 16, 2013 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Merry Christmas

Merry Christmas
Geremia and Esker as also ...Ian and Stan
are pillars of modern poetry....

I have observed over the past over three years
that I have been here,

some self styled stalwarts
love to drive women out

I have held many hands
but women are more sensitive than men
so take care

I am sure even Shakespeare would have been bitten
had he been here
now than then

Happy Reading
and
Merry Christmas to all poets...Neos and families and friends
particularly those who have ever read me
not withstanding my volumes over
poor quality

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

billypringle

billypringle

11 years 6 months ago

Are you saying that there's a misogynistic streak here?

So slowly it becomes clearer - you thought I was just another nutter having a go at you. That could not be further from the truth. I have no animosity whatsoever against you , in fact ,i don;t even know you. Any comments i made were not personal, either sexist or whatever! You continue writing and aim for excellence and screw what people say. Happy Christmas to you and yours .
Jimm

loved

loved

11 years 6 months ago

this is fair

thank you tc
but misogynistic is hardly a word to be used

loved

loved

11 years 6 months ago

so kind

hope you do finally decide
not to stay alone
a family is a boon
some independence
has to be sacrificed

just weigh and do a calm decision take
let none upon you prevail

we could unknowingly make a mistake
but your own house
don't ever stake
who knows about tomorrow
who goes first
who does sorrow

mand

mand

11 years 6 months ago

Hi Loved

Have a happy holiday - and may you have many, many more of them. I'll try and be around more often - but life can be very hectic.

Keep safe

Love Mand xxxxx

Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 6 months ago

Loved

Have a lovely Christmas and enjoy all that life gives you,
Yours Ian.T , Family and friends... plus ellipsis....and kisses xx