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Jan 28, 2018
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OF A MIND
If you’re of the mind
That your life has been unkind
I wonder how you’d fare
With misery everywhere
It’s better to accept your lot
And build on what you got
Then perhaps you’ll be of worth
When you finally, leave this earth
WIZDUMBs by JA 734
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chevyvent
7 years 5 months ago
This is a good piece just some thoughts :
depression is a mental illness not a choice, It has nothing to do with if you rich or poor. Some people will be sad and depressed their entire lives, and they don’t know how to cope with. Imagine feeling like shit your whole life and never really getting better. The best thing is to recognize the signs and get professional help.
raj
7 years 5 months ago
a good message scripted in
a good message scripted in two meaningful verses...
Regards..
Marvel Godwyn
7 years 5 months ago
It's really difficult to face
It's really difficult to face reality ,especially if it happens to be a sad one.I nicely penned poem Ja Ja.