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Mar 26, 2018
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Mind bind:
Ever insecure
Barricading the main door
Memories endure
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
weirdelf
6 years 5 months ago
Cool, but
Memories abdjure
the strongest of doors
you are not secure
OriginalRhyku
6 years 5 months ago
Weirdelf
Your comments break down poetic constructs and open doors to new vistas!