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Feb 20, 2021
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Mind like a lark
My body sinks deep
Into the
Soft white silks of slumber .
While my mind like a lark
lies awake within the dark .
my eyes torn and tattered
by the Beatific yet bleak color of blue .
Bellows out onto the
World.
“ for world turn the tides of time towards
the alluring seas of my yesteryear.
So I can flow Back to that
once familiar face.
who’s eyes once
swirled within
The sweet
serenades of
sapphire and hands.
So cold and calm
yet so caring
and warm.
I yearn for
those hands
to once again
be firmly grasped
upon mine. “
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
c lynn brooks
4 years 4 months ago
BeUTIFUL
There is such a strong pleading in your words. They brin tear to ones eyes. Just a beautiful write
Edward nigma
4 years 4 months ago
Thank you
Thank you for reading
Edward nigma
4 years 4 months ago
Thank you
https://youtu.be/X7H8Oojux-E
My inspiration
Geezer
4 years 4 months ago
I too...
feel the tugs on the heartstrings. Nice job! One thing, is the word really [bellows] like roaring or shouting? Or did you mean billows as in: swell or surge? ~ Geez.
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Edward nigma
4 years 4 months ago
Thank you
Well for bellows I meant shouting or crying