Miracles

I think this is the first poem I've read on metamorphosis. It's sweet and lovely. I have a few ideas that might help flow a bit :
l-5 You'll spin yourself a bed of silk
l-11 You will find that you are born again
these are just examples and I'm sure you can come up with much better alternative if you care to change YOUR poem which is very nice as is........................scribbler

Like a caterpillar crawls it is once reunited with colorful wings flying so gracefully and free to cascade in the air.

Great one here lots of images for me and philosophical in nature

Blessings to you and the family
Love - Mona
xox

to see you here again, I really liked this one. It kinda reminds me that all things change, and there is beauty everywhere, even in an ugly little caterpillar. Your rhyming is great, and this flows rather smoothly. ~ Gee

This is lovely and your rhyming is smooth as spun butter! I love the theme. I hope you are well.

love, Cat

Green Eyes
You so vividly depict,
The transformation of life,
From a caterpillar emerges
A butterfly
And then she flies away
To help the conveyance of pollen,
From one flower to another
And helps the modes of transplantation

So your poem so explicitly proves
My theory of evolution,
Green Eyes you have some call you
Elizabeth,
They must perhaps know you,
True,
But for me Green Eyes would do.

The rebirth in to a grander life, like traveling the bi-ways of life from a child and spreading your wings of adulthood. that is grand.
I loved everything about this write. the ugly ducking story, but you gave it real life.
Always Eddie

You will cover yourself with silk,
Then sleep the winter long,
You will awaken with a burst,
At the mockingbirds first song.

This is just beautifully written!

love, Cat