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Jan 07, 2019
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The Mirror
It smiled as we approached
We came nearer
To check our appearances
Did our clothes hang well
We made adjustments here and there
The mirror knew our faults
It smiled again as we left
We would come again
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Dear Neopoets do you like my poem. You can contact me at my email address ifeanyiiweze@yahoo.com Eulekia
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
6 years 5 months ago
Your poem is deeply subversive and disturbing.
I congratulate you, ironically [smiles a bit weirdly].
What? You think we want Hallmark cards here?
Follow this up with the courage to directly attsck mediocrity in all forms without getting arrested as a member of ISIS.
Seriously, Eulekia, I see great promise here.
Eulekia
6 years 5 months ago
The Mirror
Weirdelf
thank you for your comment on my poem. I will be sending more of my poems in.
Eulekia
weirdelf
6 years 5 months ago
I can't help noticing that you have not been offering much
in the way of critique to others.
This is a community, not a service.
Oh, we could offer a critique service if your were prepared to pay. But unless it was a lot of money we wouldn't do it anyway.
We are a community.
Eulekia
6 years 5 months ago
About Critique
Dear Jess
I will do so more often.
Eulekia