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loved
loved
Apr 12, 2014 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

mirrror me mirror

A mirror simply reflects ...
the surface
depth is measured by ones eye
don't feel shy
we all are worthy creatures of nature ...
and...
we only mirror
what!
ourselves......

feel the essence of the individual,
mirrors
are only silent observers,
this is what anyone can tell

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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S

scribbler

11 years 3 months ago

Hi loved

Perhaps one day they'll figure out how to make a mirror that reveals what's inside. I think you might want to work on your last line a bit more...seems disconnected to me...........stan

Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 3 months ago

Loved

If only we could find the perfect Mirror.
Then there would be no more problems, if all could see the real self.
A good write young Bard, Take care,
Yours Ian.T

alidzain

alidzain

11 years 3 months ago

Hi Loved

For some reasons, this piece reminds me of a Malay saying which, if translated in English ,will be "look at yourself in the mirror before you condemn other's shortcomings". Anyway, its a lovely piece .Good job. ;D

Alid

Esker

Esker

11 years 3 months ago

looking...

i dont know....what it is....
the look important
vanity
ego

within i know little of
and of warmth i give
little
the rare moments
shinning

this gives me hope
thank you

loved

loved

11 years 3 months ago

Esker your reading me

gives me more hope to compose
as you then share your warmth
with a simplistic poet like me

Breakinglogic

Breakinglogic

11 years 2 months ago

Aye, the eye perceives more

Aye, the eye perceives more than a mirror can candidly render, such that others might see in us an esoterically deeper being than what we might observe in ourselves.

Lovely,

logic