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Apr 16, 2023
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Mis-taken Identity
Creative people
seldom
lately
rise
to
challenge greatness,
but pursue.
"Some" (like you), find attention
in lowering
the bar.
>Thomas<
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Any grammar or punctuation corrections are also welcome
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
2 years ago
Mis-taken Identity
Hello, Thomas,
So well written, I feel the prick of the pin!
L
Triskelion
2 years ago
Just a ..
..short rant on people that find their popularity in the arts by means other than genuine talent. Not directed at anyone in particular.
Thanks for reading!
Thomas