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Miss Me

It's been so lovely lately
come sing me of your tune,

there's nothing between us
but, the brightness of the moon.

You goin" through them changes
makes me no nevermind

but, when you do so.....tread lightly,
and please try not, to be so unkind.

Miss be baby,
miss me, girl.....please...
..miss me, honey,
miss me with all that;

(repeat refrain, please.)

But, even if there were rainbows
at the daybreaks' end,

you can't help from changin',
but, I must know that your my friend,

You're goin' through changes
and, I can't say that I mind;

but, when you go through them there changes,
don't be so unkind.

Miss me, baby
miss be baby, pleeaase!
miss me, bsby,
miss me with all THAT!

(repeat refrain, please).

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Comments

R

raj

14 years 6 months ago

nice beats...

this write of yours or should i be saying lament..has a nice beat and rhythm to it of your heartbeats...i was prompted to call it a lament because of the element of craving which is very palpable...

warmly..

docmaverick

docmaverick

14 years 6 months ago

Yeah, Raj...

..I see what you mean, after re-reading it; I just hope that it is a lament, more than a rant! Thanx, for your comment; it had substance.
doc.