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Apr 21, 2022
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Misty mammoth mountains
The heather
bearing
her masterful
mane of
misty mammoth
mountains that tower
over my eye .
Yet still cower beneath
that blissful
bluebird sky .
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
3 years 2 months ago
dear Edward,
I see that you made it through Friday okay. how are you feeling?
p.s.
I'll be back to comment on your poem later.
*hugs, Cat
Edward nigma
3 years 2 months ago
It’s Thursday
I have it tomorrow
Jackweb
3 years 2 months ago
This mean ...
There are times the freezing fog covers around the mountain top, and it is evident that you will definitely have a blur vision; so to see clearer above the sky is impossible!
Candlewitch
3 years 2 months ago
dear Edward,
my prayers and thoughts are with you.
Hugs, Cat