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mnenomic Dali
the tipping point
turns
the road is smooth
but not yet traveled
creature comforts for a fool's paradise,
what do I know, for example?
the night is long and dark in the algid breath
of winter and spring comes on forever
no matter the discontented hour.
I'm just an old fool sometimes,
my body is my cage, my mind a sharpened weapon
lacking courage to pluck out my own eyes, strange
thoughts govern;
beyond the persistence of time and its pleasure
there is a field that feels alive, my untrained hands
grope its waning light, I see it speak in tongues
with clouds of people coming down from the mountain,
peeling away, I reminisce with the onion paper of skin;
by the insistence of poetry, I am expiated;
I put on a freshly ironed blouse, cover myself with flowers,
lay bare my poem.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
alidzain
10 years 10 months ago
this one has a lot of imagery
and new words for me to learn. Thank you for sharing..emmm, just curious. Can you tell me more about the poem?
Alid
Ian.T
10 years 10 months ago
Anna
A beauty is held within this write, also a fear that you are having.
You say about growing old, maybe say, you are passing the time allotted to you, with learning and poetry is the escape sometimes, and what a joy to read of your escape.
Yours as always Ian.T
themoonman
10 years 10 months ago
Anna,
Your contributions to my sanity have been missed,
thank you.
Esker
10 years 10 months ago
the gust in the filiment.
new words
not felt in awhile..
like the visions..
thank you!
Lonnie
10 years 9 months ago
Hey Anna,
Long time, no see! Glad you are back with more of your poetic expertise to share with us all and make us envious of your skill with a pen! This one is a prime example of Kalishana at her finest!