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Oct 22, 2016
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Model Mavericks:
Ingenuity
Benefits humanity
For posterity
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Idealists, Ideas, Inventors, Inventions, Intellectuals, Insights
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Candlewitch
8 years 4 months ago
hello :)
I agree!!!
always, Cat
OriginalRhyku
8 years 1 month ago
Remark, Cat, thanks for the input
If I understand your critiques correctly, it seems the drama is lost in the panorama.