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Modern Meditation
Where is the need
to pray
nude
lying on the sand
endeavouring to cover
secret places
Where is the need
to meditate
cross legged
one can meditate
even when walking
Love resides
in hearts
the Sun has given one
the energy to contain
as long as one lives
there is no need
to show
artificiality
all are of same kind of
humans
just pray
let all come and bow
they may
not to you
but to the sun
from where you came
when you are back home
Sun will of course welcome
not only you
but all who were frames
of light and energy
Sun gave birth
in so many forms
of animals
fl-aura and fauna
and
evolved through ages
for you to become a man
when you were born
you were nude
why are you now
ashamed
be yourself
as you are the
Father
of future human
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sparrow 42
5 years 6 months ago
Loved
A way of thinking, not that of meditation.
Some good points in here for many to see themselves.
Maybe meditation is to see others more clearly..
Hope your MMXX is going well,
Yours Ian ..
lovedly
5 years 6 months ago
xxmm
is fine
meditation is a man made design
to concentrate one's wavering mind
Ian
lovedly
3 years 7 months ago
read it
no harm done half a battle you may have won meditate man o woman