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lovedly

Dec 06, 2018 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Moms could be Moms only

there is a guy I knew unmarried wanted to marry desparately
I asked him why then don't you
he confided
his mother was looking
for a suitable girl
beautiful
rich but like a home maid/nurse
so that when she wanted a massage
she would
and
cook a meal as and when
and
sleep besides her at night

Seven years she had taken
so far
couldn't be obliged
as yet

so now he has become wise
he ran away with a fatty
lives at her place mostly
when he comes home
shows his mom a sullen face
when will you find one for me
he weeps

moms are moms

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

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Comments

6 years 7 months ago

this is funny

"ran away with a fatty..."

makes the poem, you put that just in the right spot.

6 years 7 months ago

thanks Eumol

This was inspired by some poem I read here
about someones overbearing mom
hence my friends
LOL

6 years 7 months ago

Haha.

Haha.
I am a mom by the way. You gave me some ideas what to do when my sons will start looking.

6 years 7 months ago

hahahaa lol

in the West
sons themselves choose the best
many vie with gals
in the class
and
then a love test pass
they kiss each other
then say come over

6 years 7 months ago

Mum,

Mum is always the boss when in mom's house, and very fussy when it comes having new inlaws. Regards Roscoe...

6 years 7 months ago

yeah thanks

I have experienced