loved

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moms love

I think i shall also abandon poetry
and
write plain and simple prose
so many poems
on mothers did I compose
many were better than prose
as sentiments for mothers... we... can only convey
once in a life's unique way

as nothing on earth can replace a mother
why...
because only she does lifelong bother
to be with us all our lives

mothers love comes before wives
even after she has left

Oh my gosh
what a surprise

so for a mother's love
praise
in a standing ovation all rise...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

Frenchf

12 years 6 months ago

I love my mother too

Who doesn't? Just curious. My brothers had mixed love hate. Standing ovation for all mothers. lovely

loved

12 years 6 months ago

Wellall I can say is

thanks in capitals

Jenifer James

12 years 6 months ago

I'm working on a mother poem

I'm working on a mother poem at the moment. Being one, I want unconditional love/ having had one, I'm not so sure.

Frenchf

12 years 6 months ago

As time passes

All the supposed wrong they did fades into the background and only the good is remembered

loved

12 years 6 months ago

you are that mother

I'd love to have
All the best

Frenchf

12 years 6 months ago

Adoption

If you are young enough and I am old enough for you to be my natural born child xxx

loved

12 years 6 months ago

perhaps

as you mayn't know
the number of dawns
I have scored ,

maybe it could be the other way around ..
anyway ...
its kind of you
to have respected mothers true .

I am an actor of poetry
I get into the garb
of anyone who so desires
to extract ...
an emotion ...
no motion

Frenchf

12 years 6 months ago

Age

What an amazing way to describe age! The number of dawns I have scored. Scribbler, mother love is despite knowing your child is a mass murderer!

loved

12 years 6 months ago

only a mom can convince any judge

her child is juvenile
at all ages
so pardon him ...

thanks for counting the dawns
why scribble???

scribbler

12 years 6 months ago

Hi Loved

I reckon mothers love us because they are blind to our faults lol. A nice tribute to those who are blinded by love..............stan

Seren

12 years 6 months ago

loved

My greatest joy in life is being a mum .... I know my kids have faults but I find it hard to see them Lol
I really liked this

Well done

Love Jc xxx