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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Nov 30, 2015 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
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The moon ran for shade

It's not so bad
but, certainly sad
to see the moon fade
running for shade
swiftly behind dark clouds.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Copied and pasted from notes on my iPad

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

9 years 7 months ago

Thanks

Glad you like it. Was a quick moment I needed to jot down.

Sparrow

Sparrow

9 years 7 months ago

Barbara

When I saw the title, it brought a load of pictures and thoughts to the mind, sorry but there is a need to write more on this theme, the ideas that are on your I Pad are there just to trigger a longer piece, I shall wait for the other words to this, or shall we collaborate ???
Yours as always Ian x

An edition that needs an edit:-

I shall await your rebirth,
Then you can sing to me
Melodies of lover’s dreams
As you cruise across the sky

Let me dream some more
Bathing in your glow before I die
There held in diamonds sparkle
You let lovers meet and bathe

A whisper from eternity
Where ages of touch are held
In a peace of just being close
Let me dream some more..

Yours Ian xx

Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

9 years 7 months ago

Nice

It captures my attention. Collaboration would be nice.

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 7 months ago

barabara

if the cold moon runs after shade
what of the sun
it will run after rain

clouds will remain in pain
all and ever again
and we will be deprived of rain
simple and plain

Esker

Esker

9 years 7 months ago

wow

that what wild!!
great vivid piece
Thank U !

Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

9 years 7 months ago

Thanks

Sometimes things capture my attention and I'm compelled to write