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Michael Anthony
Michael Anthony
Aug 01, 2025 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Moonshine Mishap

Sometimes, when I see a full moon
hanging close in the evening,
after it's conquest of the day,

I think of the unfortunate time
it had a wayward rocket lodged in its eye;

as documented in the film,
A Trip to the Moon.
Luckily, it seems to have healed nicely

and forgiven the fools inside
when I look there.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: More random silliness from my wayward pen.

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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Geezer

Geezer

1 month 3 weeks ago

Funny...

 I saw that old film, many years ago, but the visual has stuck with me and was instantly recognizable in your words. Well done sir, ~ Geez.

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Ruby Lord

Ruby Lord

1 month 3 weeks ago

I remember that film too. I…

I remember that film too. I loved it as a child, always made me feel as if anything could happen. And here we are ha ha. Great poem, I really enjoyed it and when the moon is full again, I'll look for that damaged eye. Ruby :)

Lavender

Lavender

1 month 3 weeks ago

Moonshine Mishap

Hello, Michael,

The poor moon took a beating, yet there it still shines. I like to check out old graphics, too. A bit of nostalgia can be grounding.

Thank you!

L