The Morning After

Meet new day with restored vigor
My heart is light and full of you
You start the race and pull the trigger
Your engine is now revving too

I want to dance now, soul to soul
You of course always agree
With sultry swaying, rollicking
Matching movements made by me

Now in dark of early morn
Before the sun begins to show
I sit and smile and radiate
Basking in this afterglow

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I think you know what this is about

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S.A., USA

Favorite Poets: Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Walt Whitman. I’m enamored by the work of lyricists such as Robert Hunter, John Barlow, John Dyer Baizley, and Tom Marshall just to name a handful.

Comments

Lavender

2 years 8 months ago

The Morning After

Hello, Tim,
I see this has been a good day for you and yours! I wish Neo had those emoji thing-ys. I'd give this a thumbs up, wink-wink, blush, and of course, a big red heart. This is happy in the happiest way! Really like your title, and your final line is charming!
Thank you!
L