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Mother

She rode the southern winds,

set down in the north

on Azaleas once again,

warms little buds as

they scream in their birth

and spring into blooms

-colorful bursts.

Delights for all

beholding landscapes.

Now she's off in a cloud

with the seeds of love

wooooosh

to love you true.

(and she does with a passion)

She weeps tears of youth,

makes rainbows scenic.

Warms your heart

you’ll know she is there.

Adorned with bouquets

...this banquet is for you.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: USA the bay state, United Kingdom, Australia, South Africa, Nigeria, Canada, Europe, USA

Favorite Poets: Dylon, George Harrison, Leonard Cohen, Jess, Rett, Black Mountain Gang

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Geezer

Geezer

2 months 3 weeks ago

A vivid...

description of Mother Nature in Springtime! ~ Geez.

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