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Aug 02, 2022
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This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem of The Week Contest July 31 to August 6 2022
Mother Earth
Untamed maiden of the mountains,
You soar with golden eagles,
No malice has ensnared you,
As you roam in harmonious joy,
Dancing to the enchanting call of morning birds,
The mischievous wind your playful friend,
All the while from daunting heights,
You welcome the vastness before you,
Your essence enticed forth,
Encompassing all,
In hypnotic trance,
You are elevated,
Beyond conscious thought,
Unveiling the unconscious truth,
You have unraveled the riddles,
And are showered with the rain of wisdom,
Drenched,
Eternal balance your swaying chant,
As you are crowned mother earth.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Jackweb
2 years 11 months ago
Hello Wolff!
Very descriptive piece! I love the metaphor used in the title. This is a laudatory epithet!
Beautiful work!
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C. Wolff
2 years 11 months ago
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much!
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 11 months ago
Stunning
Again a beautifully written poem. Really impressive.
My fav:
Encompassing all,
In hypnotic trance,
You are elevated,
Beyond conscious thought,
Unveiling the unconscious truth,
You have unraveled the riddles,
And are showered with the rain of wisdom,
Drenched,
Eternal balance your swaying chant,
As you are crowned mother earth.
Super job,
Tim
C. Wolff
2 years 11 months ago
Thank you!!
Thank you!!
Candlewitch
2 years 11 months ago
dear C. Wolff,
soon the seasons will change again, as Mother Gaia turns the green leaves to vibrant colors. she reminds us of her powers... excellent write!
*hugs, Cat
C. Wolff
2 years 11 months ago
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much!
RoseBlack
2 years 11 months ago
Fantastic
Beautiful imagery wrapped in your immense love of nature and all that goes with it. I really enjoy your writing. Keep up the good work.
C. Wolff
2 years 11 months ago
Thank you so much!!
Thank you so much!!