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Mountains That Move

At first glance the ground shivers

the trees sway and lift with ease

the seas align with the pattern of the sun

and to know -

true gifts are given in revelations

among the hopeless there's a man

sitting with bars and rails

and thus he goes -

attempting to change the pulse of the ground

to exchange negotiations with man

so the thoughts can prevail with vengeance

and thy mighty hands can protrude through

to ask - 'can mountains be moved'

believe the tale of lions and wolves

give heart and take strain -

no vast level is possible beyond air

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

Favorite Poets: Langston Hughes, Mya Angelo, Neo Richardson

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