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Feb 20, 2023
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Mouths
save those pretty knees
for the men that made
those mouths you feed
circle back to me
when you remember
how to find your beast
you and me
we don't make mouths
we make memories
the mouth I need
growls and forgets
what human means
the woman I feed
arches her back
makes a mockery of modest
and a meal out of me
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 4 months ago
Dude
Where is everyone on this? I drove over an hour both ways and worked all day on holiday…and come home, read this and there are no comments. None of ladies have spoken their dreamy dreams. Men, take notes.
Awesome job,
Tim
Indivisible_Origin
2 years 4 months ago
Lol
Thanks man! You're too much. Boo to work on the holiday but kind thanks for taking time to read me when your day was over.
Best, IO
Indivisible_Origin
2 years 4 months ago
Heard
Yah I respect that. This piece's intended wasn't thrilled about it either but she didn't say it near as polite as you. Thank you as always for reading. I appreciate it
IO
Candlewitch
2 years 4 months ago
dear IO
I fall down at almost anything you write...AND, I Loved this poem!!!
*hugs and smiles, Cat
Indivisible_Origin
2 years 4 months ago
Thank you!
You are always so kind and supportive. Thank you for this. I'm sure I'll write something eventually you won't love. Not that I'd ever try :)
IO
Candlewitch
2 years 4 months ago
dear IO,
I always look for the good in everything, but I will always tell you my truth...
*hugs, Cat