A Muse

Now this was good. Almost as if the muse really was talking to such as us. But being me I can't help but give some alternative for you to smoke over :
L-8 try not yet seen or yet unseen
L-15 change to to onto.....try saying that 5 times fast lol
L-16 try illustrate instead of literate
As usual these are only suggestions that if ignored won't bother me at all.............stan

As you talk to the muse in me
I get I inspired.
My minds eye see the light
Before your pen

Wonderfully inspirational! I know of a few young poets (especially) who could benefit from the reading this and gleaning the advice held within. I have one suggestion:

so as to later pen to paper (incert the word "put" before "pen" or something like it)

Your writes are always filled with such tangible energy! Cannot choose favorite lines as I would have to quote the whole poem back at you.

always, Cat

This is advice and inspiration I need. I think sometimes I have run out of words to string together for a poem. I like the visual image of your wings carrying me to places yet unseen.

Linda

Eddie

I felt this one and it is really great. You have gotten so much better here. I love this part. It spoke volumes to me:

Your moment is not now
It is when I am gone
Only then will you understand
All that I have said

Just lovely Eddie. Nothing to fix

Mona

but the last few poems of yours I read seem to be "try hards". Trying to be flowerfully, ornamentally meaningful, which takes away from the sting of the meaning for me.

If you combine you disciplined writing with some more plain spoken truths and emotions I think you might be on to something.

In short, don't be so poetic! [grins]