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My Color Bouquet.Emotion In Colours-March Contest

When you play in the garden of Eden
devour greenery be happy
swimming in the ocean wear a blue bikini
merge with what's next waiting
never ever be angry lovers bring roses
red so many you will cheer up Betty

never feel dull grey is for fools
not you

enjoy orange lovely feeling
when you are pealing
as she comes in a yellow dress
just whistle she'll say woh hoo
you look like Dorris Day only smile
don't say Doris who

as you are invited for a softy
be calm like aqua
cool like silent lake water

a time will now come
when you wanna jump
say Violet where in hell are you
I need you hi sexy are you

when his lips are chilly
say give me rum and lime
in darkness be not scared
go bare cling on to him
here comes an opportunity

as the sky is darkened blue
will it snow or rain ask the met will you
be smart never silly
purple is only for Royalty
you'd wish to be

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Life is colourful njoi it

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

3 years 3 months ago

hello Lovedly,

I like these lines:

as you are invited for a softy
be calm like aqua
cool like silent lake water

*hugs, Cat

lovedly

lovedly

3 years 3 months ago

All are busy

some in greenery
still hoping
many in darkness
also coping

We two are only making merry
reading NEOPOETS lovely poetry

Sunny life we must lead
red blue and green
and as you say
aqua cool

yes I am in these thoughts
with Cats
you
so thank you

lovedly

lovedly

3 years 3 months ago

Cats

thank you
ur a nice poetess

Geezer

Geezer

3 years 3 months ago

Hmmmm...

Yes, that would be Violet! She always was "in the mood". and she liked being bare. I said once, how come naked? She said that is such an ugly sounding word; 'bare sounds much nicer and pleases me." Your choice of colors is very well done. ~ Geez.
.

L

Lord Barham

2 years 11 months ago

no one does it like cummings!

Yeah, you have that same sense of playfulness that I get from his stuff. I've tried for it but never quite reached it, so well done!

L

Lord Barham

2 years 11 months ago

reply to reply

I quite liked his poem, "Anyone Lived In A Pretty How Town". I have read his book about his stay in a French concentration camp during the Great War, "The Enormous Room" twice. I love his description of some of his fellow inhabitants as "delectable mountains".

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 11 months ago

thanks

do visit my page I have in the past over 19 years posted thousands
DO READ NOW in Q
GIVE PEACE A CHANCE....
U'D LIKE IT
LORDS

L

Lord Barham

2 years 11 months ago

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Will do! I've been kind of away from the computer for a few days (helping my brother redo his back deck among other things) and also, having the laptop in my lap aggravates my arthritis, tendinitis or bursitis or whatever idiotic itis they haven't found name for yet. Lookin' forward to it.

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 11 months ago

keep all

ITIS TITIS under folds nail a few here and there tie with threads make no holes
as we age
we need to improve
eppititis loo
so thanks
Mi LORDS

L

Lord Barham

2 years 11 months ago

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It's hard for me to imagine inspiring anyone! (I certainly tried to inspire my students when I was teaching, but how successful I was is anybody's guess. Most of the time, I felt like I was really accomplishing all that much! However, some of my former students would beg to differ.)

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 11 months ago

You are good

you are selfless
in today's world
one cannot find few
like you
miLORD