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Sep 21, 2022
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My conversation with a famous person.
My conversation with the famous person went something like this! How did you get so famous just by writing and flipping pages? When I become big and Grand my lyricism will be psychedelic, moving within your system like a high repellent!. I told him I'm jealous he said " one day you two will reap great wellness!, be that diamond that you are !as sharp as your poetic lyrics that got you this far"!.
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ray Whitaker
2 years 9 months ago
Welcome to Neopoet!
I see you enjoy writing in prose form. I don’t pretend to understand the form. I’ve only dabbled in it.
Looking forward to reading more from you in future!