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Jan 12, 2025
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My Destination
You are that rainstorm,
I’m swept away in the downpour,
You are that blizzard,
I’m a shard of ice,
I’m melted,
In your fire.
You are that dream,
I place in my heart,
My destination,
A lifetime pursuit.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Would this be considered a love poem?
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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