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Jan 19, 2023
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In my element
I make my rules,
And live by them,
Its what I choose,
Without regret.
My own peace first,
Before anything else,
I Won't compile stress,
On my free life desk.
I am calm and crazy,
Both at a time,
I won't give you nice,
When you give me limes.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 5 months ago
Absolutely ...
perfect, with no reservations, either in message or form. ~ Geezer.
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Hussainy
2 years 5 months ago
Geezer
Thank you
We are all suppose to learn to put our own self first before anything else
Hussainy
2 years 5 months ago
@Ekaterina
Thank you for understanding
RoseBlack
2 years 5 months ago
Strong message
Always your own mental health and well being before anything else- you can't be a help to others, if you are feeling poorly yourself! Good job!
Candlewitch
2 years 5 months ago
hello,
I think you have a firm grasp of the situation. good work!
*hugs, Cat