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Aug 01, 2022
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MY EMOTIONS
Don't try to tickle me
my emotions are enough
to shed trickles down my cheeks
For years I have controlled myself
why should we depend on others
yet
Emotion by itself is a lubrication
it helps memories to escape quickly
Use yours instantly
lest like me one day
if not today
some day
you may need me
Then sadly enough
dry and drained
no emotion left in my veins
Till then just wait and see
where
you will
and
I shall be
maybe
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Emotion is the best of all lubrications
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 11 months ago
Emotional oil...
lubricates the life-blood! Keeps the heart pumping and makes for easy living.
~ Geez.
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lovedly
2 years 11 months ago
ha ha Geeez
this poem was born from neopoet's poetic seeds
did u read
newer genes
in bloodless jeans
lolol
Geezer
2 years 11 months ago
Yup...
I did. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
2 years 11 months ago
TIRED NOW
RESTING for a while