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Apr 03, 2025
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My Father
My Father is my hero.
My best friend and role model.
He always says time is money.
My Father works hard at what he does and
achieves the best he can.
My Father was a Superiendent at Heaven Hill Distillery.
As a child he took me to work with him.
My Father taught me the Love of God the Father
My Father is t he head of our family.He shows us
unconditional love and respect for each other.
My Father was a wonderful, loving Father to me.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Read and give me pointers
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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