Rula

Jan 13, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

This poem is part of the challenge:

January 2023 Challenge My Freestyle

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My Freestyle

Here flow my drops of ink...free No chains to restrict, no barriers, no real boundaries, unlike my homeland, my occupied country Palestine Here fly my words free with birds or even fall like the leaves off an autumn tree .........free unlike the martyrs in my homeland,in my loving Palestine Here I'd sip in my ink to live forever free in my homeland, my occupied loving country in Palestine ReplyForward

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Comments

Lavender

2 years 5 months ago

My Freestyle

Hello, Rula,
A strong passionate poem in a beautiful, soft visual form. Your words flow freely just like the drops of ink.
xx
L

Rula

2 years 5 months ago

Thank you dear

As always, I'm so grateful for your kind words and the positive feedback.

Candlewitch

2 years 5 months ago

dear Rula,

I agree with Lavender. just beautiful, all three stages...like little worlds unto themselves.

*hugs, Cat

Rula

2 years 5 months ago

You're

so kind dear Cat. So happy it appesls to you dear

RoseBlack

2 years 5 months ago

What a strong poem

I love the form used...as always you give us something new and wonderful to experience from reading your works...well done.

Rula

2 years 5 months ago

Dear Carrie

Your visit is always appreciated. your complementing words give me the motivation to always try something new.

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 5 months ago

I have opinions about this

These opinions they aren’t very popular in my country. I think this is really strong work. It’s our job as artists and writers to put these issues under the microscope. This violence and forceful diaspora of the Palestinian people in the name of the state of Israel is terrible. It’s my belief both groups deserve to enjoy their motherland. The United State of Palestine and Israel perhaps. Maybe one day we can get it sorted out. Until then we hope and we write.

Amazing job on the formatting,
Tim

Rula

2 years 5 months ago

Thank you Tim

I'm thankful for reading my work and leaving such an honest comment. I don't think Palestinians will ever accept a one state for them and the Israelies. This is politics that never works with people. I just, like you, hope peace shall prevail sooner than later everywhere on this loving planet.
Thank you!

Rula

2 years 5 months ago

Thank you!

It breaks my heart too to see young men and women daily killed with cold blood only because they ask for justice and for defending their homes and families.
Your words mean a lot !