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Anna Severchuk
Anna Severchuk
Apr 09, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

In my head

I'm begging, please, get out from my head!
It's time I feel like the deadest of the dead...
And I know that right now I'm going down
Like a king, who is losing his golden crown;
But my heart is still beating, yes, I'm alive
Besides in my back there is big and sharp knife;
There are people around with masks on the faces
And everyone tries just to win the life races...
Well, I hope that my life won't come to the end
Till all is done and I can all understand.
I believe that I won't be forgotten by you all -
I just want to stay alive in your mind and soul.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Odessa,Ukraine, UKR

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Michael Anthony

Michael Anthony

3 years 3 months ago

Welcome Anna! You are with

Welcome Anna! You are with friends here, and our thoughts are with you and yours during this terrible time for Ukraine. We are happy to have you here as part of our community. Please be safe and keep writing.

Best

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

3 years 3 months ago

hello Anna,

nice to meet you! I will light a white candle for your safety. hang in there!

*hugs, Cat

Ray Whitaker

Ray Whitaker

3 years 3 months ago

Welcome to the website!

I am looking forward to reading more of your work. I imagine that it has taken quite an effort to make contact from your city at this time. We are an international community of poets and poetry lovers.

There a select few of us that have written about your country’s plight. Please look around The Stream should you want to see how much has been written.

I personally welcome you!

C

cathy mccormick

3 years 3 months ago

welcome. i promise i will

welcome. i promise i will not forget you. ever. we are with you. hoping our president will do more. do what yours asks. you are our heroes. we in usa are watching many of our freedoms being taken away. not like yours. may peace come soon.