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judyanne
judyanne
Jan 24, 2015 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

my knew friend

I have this knew and reel good friend
he's come too help me with my rights
my poems and my prose, shortly
will aspirate too grater heights

I now know longer kneed worry
if weather I have spilt things write

I can rely on my knew friend
to watch four me four for spilling slights
sew now my talent will a crew
and I'll right stuff of pure delights

with not a care I might mis-do
(and know kneed now four dumb re-rights).

ewe sea, with this knew reel good friend
I feel it's like I've hit bingo
In future rites, with nil ado
accomplished spilling will jest glow

And this won is just prefect two -
my new spill chick, he toll me sew
,

About This Poem

Last Few Words: just having a bit of fun ...

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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Comments

Rula

Rula

10 years 5 months ago

yahoooo!!!

You'v reelly improved deer judy. Congts. on having this knew friend.
Mutch fun indeed...Hahaha.
( such a funny poem needs a bit of fun comment)

Sparrow

Sparrow

10 years 5 months ago

Judy

A fun write I wonder what school of thought this came from, and did they only teach arithmetic lol.
Loved it, I think there are a few right mistakes you must pay more attention lol,
Yours Yenti

wesley snow

wesley snow

10 years 5 months ago

I always like your poetry.

I have a suggestion however.

I have this knew and reel good friend.
I think "knew" should be "new" and "reel" should be spelled "real".

S

scribbler

10 years 5 months ago

come on wes

Get into the spirit of the poem. She purposely misused these words and others just for laughs lol,,,,,,stan

Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

10 years 5 months ago

Typo,

Typo hear typo their typos evry bloodi whear,yoor new friends hopeles.. LOL Nice one Love Roscoe. PS does he hier hymself oot.

judyanne

judyanne

10 years 5 months ago

WHAT !!! ??

TYPOS ??
OH KNOW !!!
WEAR?

well I won't heir out my knew friend two yew Roscoe
lol - ewe can have him - four nothing

Thanks for the visit - glad you enjoyed this
love judy
Axxx

R

raj

10 years 5 months ago

Judyanne

This had me in splits. Next time I need to check my dicktion, I will check it out with you :)

still laughing at your "Spelltoons"...i guess that would have made a good title..

judyanne

judyanne

10 years 5 months ago

good idea raj

You'll be sure to make no mistakes then :)
lol - 'dicktion' - love it
love judy
xxx

judyanne

judyanne

10 years 5 months ago

joe

Thank you very much
love judy
xxx

judyanne

judyanne

10 years 5 months ago

lol loved

The mis-spelling still needs to be passed by the spell check...
Thanks for the visit
Love judy
xxx

lovedly

lovedly

10 years 5 months ago

not miss pelling

mouth filling with mangoes
you have in Aussie too
and words come corrupted u r knew friend always knew
my friend
u know kind
also
now
how bout reading
mine two still
born still!
neopoets will one day me kill!