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May 10, 2025
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My Last Love Poem
I hate that I love you
I hope, one day, I won't
Until then,
I'll cling to every word you say
I'll let you tear out my heart
And say that you're sorry
And that you love me
The scratch in my throat
Begging me
To say "I love you too,"
Instead,
I say,
Goodbye
With shaking hands
And a cracking voice...
My love,
Goodbye.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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1 month 2 weeks ago
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mark
1 month 2 weeks ago
It's excellent!
Your poem is a testament to the poem's power when it bypasses the analytical mind and goes "straight to your heart." That ability to connect so directly suggests a raw honesty and vulnerability in the writing. And for you to feel the "agony" means that you poet have skillfully conveyed profound emotion, making me not just understand the pain, but experience it alongside you. That's the mark of truly impactful poetry – when it can evoke such a strong, visceral response. Good stuff indeed!
Mark
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