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Mar 02, 2021
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MY MOM WENT
went yes
but never left
flying about in the clouds
waiting for me
she promised
she will wait
coz twill be difficult
to find her beyond the clouds
in the mist
where HE
they say also lives
Bless me
my doc says
wait and see
the Earth guys
are still needs of Neo
many younger ones did go
whee no one knows
nor god also
do you know
About This Poem
Last Few Words: For those who did not read my poem MOM''S SMILES----- First read that please half a century she's been waiting into heaven.... no entry now Covid makes all line up in a Q
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
4 years 4 months ago
You will...
just have to wait a bit longer Lovedly. Are you anxious to find out? I could send "Killer" over to help you find the way. That is if you have no objection to being baked or roasted! ~ Geez.
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Lavender
4 years 4 months ago
My Mom Went
Hi, Lovedly,
What beautiful poetry. Your opening stanza is especially tender.
Thank you!
L
lovedly
4 years 4 months ago
Lave
you are very kind
Others pull my leg
I don't mind
at times they are also kind
Gee hehe
Geezer
4 years 4 months ago
I am afraid that...
my comment to you was a bit insensitive. I feel bad that I didn't share my opinion that you are indeed, a tender-warm-hearted person; who wants an answer that no one knows. My apologies, ~ Geez.
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scribbler
4 years 4 months ago
Remember
You don't have my permission to leave yet. Too many of us have already gone
lovedly
4 years 4 months ago
I have no mind nor desire yet
to go
I just compose poetry
to keep self fit mentally
and stay busy
poetricklie
stan ...before I go
like Ian
shall inform u also
82 nearing now
AH ALL and u know
I've just composed a sonnet
u need to read it
Before I GO