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lovedly
lovedly
Feb 08, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

My new world is Cold

Cool it!
I introduced..
cold wine too

you enjoy more
when it's chilled
and
you look for warmth
in a sexy blanket
could do after drinks cold
but not few

then both of you can do
what you want to

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Seren

Seren

2 years 5 months ago

Loved

That first lines not working for me but it could only be my sleep deprived mind.

I'd have it like this

Cool it!
I introduced...

Then the rest of the poem, my oh my never too old eh my friend wink lol

Love ya Sis xox

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 5 months ago

SIS ...

Have you ever realized since 11years
I've always listened to you and Jess
Thus I am a shadow of two....
old sincere but abs
TRUE
now mainly
GEE and YOU....
So I constantly thank you
May you
''shine too...''
as I once
''shone ''
owing to you
two

Poets Hand

Poets Hand

2 years 5 months ago

Cool It!

Does the title reflect the wine or the mood? It is up to the reader to fathom. Warmed up in a blanket not cool; but then "after drinks cold but not few". Then do what you want to do.
This is an invitation to share a time with someone wrapped in a blanket with a cold wine or two.

I'll be in that! A great poem straight forward and well thought out.
Poets Hand
Hannah