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MY POWER
In the vast space of self's sacred earth,
Where words dine, ministering meaning,
Burning within, a flame of limitless rebirth,
"My Power" sings, a bold decree.
Through valleys low, where shadows linger,
Strength grows strong, a beacon in the night,
Each trial faced, a chance to triumph,
With radiant self-love, a steadfast light.
No heavy outpouring of praise tells the soul's true worth
Priceless, rare, deep as oceans wide,
Embrace thyself, a celebration's come to life
In dignity, with grace, let self abide.
For in the essence of your being
Your lamp burns, pure and bright,
Let your power thrive, your testament to light.
#sheds™
#sheddinglight
#100dayswrite
DAY98: MY POWER
In the vast space of self's sacred earth,
Where words dine, ministering meaning,
Burning within, a flame of limitless rebirth,
"My Power" sings, a bold decree.
Through valleys low, where shadows linger,
Strength grows strong, a beacon in the night,
Each trial faced, a chance to triumph,
With radiant self-love, a steadfast light.
No heavy outpouring of praise tells the soul's true worth
Priceless, rare, deep as oceans wide,
Embrace thyself, a celebration's come to life
In dignity, with grace, let self abide.
For in the essence of your being
Your lamp burns, pure and bright,
Let your power thrive, your testament to light.
#sheds™
#sheddinglight
DAY98: MY POWER
In the vast space of self's sacred earth,
Where words dine, ministering meaning,
Burning within, a flame of limitless rebirth,
"My Power" sings, a bold decree.
Through valleys low, where shadows linger,
Strength grows strong, a beacon in the night,
Each trial faced, a chance to triumph,
With radiant self-love, a steadfast light.
No heavy outpouring of praise tells the soul's true worth
Priceless, rare, deep as oceans wide,
Embrace thyself, a celebration's come to life
In dignity, with grace, let self abide.
For in the essence of your being
Your lamp burns, pure and bright,
Let your power thrive, your testament to light.
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