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Mar 07, 2023
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My Prayer
O God!
Help the youth the truth to know
In four years fasting and rumbles
Living in an abject of poverty and tears
Great lofty pains attain
To build a nation where peace
And justice shall reign.
Help the youth the truth to know
In sorrow of slavery and humiliation
Under a nameless power
Great sadness attain
To build a nation where peace
And justice shall reign.
O God!
Help the youth the truth to know.
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Mr joghe
2 years 4 months ago
Bravery comment!
Bravery comment!
I really appreciate your use of words.