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Sep 12, 2014
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My Rosy Lover ..re ed
These roses speak of truth
love starts from early youth
till it exposes the real truth
as it buds...
roses
within you
so
this is love
as this lovely happy couple
speak only of love
as they dance
you can see above
oh what is love
so many ask of me
tis it... tis it... tis love
smile and dance like these two
then you will realise
what true love is
it tastes better than honey
where is the question of money
tis love
tis it
love
my Love!
Dear loved
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
alidzain
10 years 10 months ago
roses,eh
trim the thorns and its lovelier
but some will say without the pain of sacrifice,
it will be soo much duller
as if it lacks colour
love is sweeter than honey
more valuable than money
more lasting than wealth
as it contributes good health
oh love is
just lovely
Alid
lovedly
10 years 10 months ago
how sweet of u
lovely roses for u