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Feb 18, 2012
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My Thoughts!
The rage within the poet and critique
rages without volition
no speed
it divulges of its own
in both .
The poet is at liberty to seek comfort
Yes solace or pity
and
massage ones ego
so be it ,
as an original creator of a verse
or one who only generates a curse .
come what may
poets must never be disturbed
as other's minds
may be by birth worse .
commute to print
the sojourn of life
let it sink in your
or your spouse's vice
and
let it be the angel of truce
when two poets
in the fiefdom of poetry
compete
Ramón or Bruce
great Neopoets
we...
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
13 years 5 months ago
So untrue!
Poets are a community and Neopoet is one.
We can only improve by community. We share, compare, criticise and delight in each others work.
weirdelf
13 years 5 months ago
or perhaps i am stupid again
and missed your intent.