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My time is not up yet

In the frolic of
folly i amaze
into metaphorical mystery
i gaze.
Stark naked eyes
unknowing
the blank.
A mysery self-wrought
in the brooks
and
woods walked.
Then the last breath
shall surge
half in half out.
My soul if i have one
may submerge
In the glorification
of time
I thought
was once only mine..

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

14 years 1 month ago

Maybe,

Maybe your time has just begaun, nice poem. Regards Roscoe...

loved

loved

14 years 1 month ago

thanks

for this as well as msg pm