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In my wildest dreams

In my wildest dreams
I never thought you'd reply
a lost poet on Neopoet
read by all
but commented upon
like grass
on my head totally bald
though sparse

(hair still glowing)

This is no farce
I searched you in
the streets of Ontario
in Florida
and South America
Argentina,

hoping to find a guy
who only vomits all the time
words like tomorrows wine
bottled in super radiated sunshine
as an elixir
for the forth coming unborn
who have yet to be,
by women borne!!!

I take it the music
those sounds
have chained you all around
and
with no smear of lipstick nor rouge
your love all poets here have found
they relish....too...
but the poetry is recourse
imbibed by a minuscule few
and
one of them is solely
You!!!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: MOST ABSTRACT-EST POETRY THIS

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

9 years 10 months ago

Poetic quality...

is not always exemplified by rhyme or meter. I find this very interesting. ~ Gee

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 10 months ago

thank you so much

thank you so much

Geezer
for your encouragement
neither rhyme nor meter
in my time
'twas inches and feet
to show off ones
exemplary feat!!!

Sparrow

Sparrow

9 years 10 months ago

Loved

A good write thought you would like this 5-7-5 one:-

My old yard stick here
Not metric, just three feet true
A milliners dream..

Yours, Ian..