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May 31, 2019
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Mysterious Cat
Across from me I see a cat,
I note her pattern and design;
I marvel how her body flows
In beautiful authentic rhyme.
I watch intently her movements,
I wish to know what they define;
but tense excitement cause a sound,
and eyes wheel to alight on mine!
My stare is captured in her pull
In her wide penetrating eyes,
And strange -her power holds me there
Until her thoughts are satisfied.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
6 years 1 month ago
Excellent...
I got the scene clearly and the thoughts that might flit through one's mind as looking at a cat in motion. You captured the pull of a cat's eyes as they regard you and measure your intent. Very nice!
~ Geezer.
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tyro
6 years 1 month ago
"You captured the pull of a
"You captured the pull of a cat's eyes as they regard you and measure your intent"
thank you, you saw the main point of the moon.
lovedone
6 years 1 month ago
hello cat's eyes
read lovedly
in new garb as
lovedone
transformation
tyro