lou

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The Naked Biker

They call him the naked biker
he streaks from town to town,
teasing all the ladies with his manly frame.

When you hear the engine of a vintage motorbike roar
you can be sure that he is on his way.
So lock up your daughters, cover your eyes today

You have to hope he won't dismount,
and give you the full show.
With his friend John Thomas he might terrorise the town.

They call him the naked biker
He flaunts his butt cheeks far and wide
He's such an exhibitionist you have to run and hide.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: For the Naked Biker, otherwise known as Geezer, with his permission, with much love.

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

Comments

Kailashana2

13 years 9 months ago

the naked biker rides

the naked biker rides
his flag is waving in the breeze
and I wonder where his allegiance is
when he stands at attention.

;-)

Candlewitch

13 years 9 months ago

Dear Lou,

I couldn't help but chuckle the second time I read this!

always, Cat

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Cat

thank you
love lou

Barbara Writes

13 years 9 months ago

Lou

thought i might have fun with your poem from a male view. i hope you don"t mind. this is what i came up with. I'm not suggesting any changes as your is really good.

She’s called the naked biker
flashing from town to town,
teasing men with her feminine frame.

When you hear the engine of a raw, vintage, motorcycle
be certain she’s coming, so
lock up your son, cover your eyes

Hope she doesn’t descend
giving her full show with friend Peggy Sue, because
she might terrorize the town.

She’s called the naked biker
who flaunts her tits far and wide
a grand diva, run and hide.

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Barbara

Nice job

Why don't you come up with a poem yourself.

Lou

Barbara Writes

13 years 9 months ago

i really was just sharing how i thought you poem should in my mind. it was easier to do it this way, rather than try expressing it in normal critique. my mind switch gears on me a lot so i simply go with the flow that it fun.

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Barbara

No problem, I wasn't offended.

Lou

Barbara Writes

13 years 9 months ago

happy to hear that

i have an extremely sensitive conscience that beats me to a pulp lol

Geezer

13 years 9 months ago

I love it!...

That should warn those townspeople! It would have been better with the picture! LOL Great fun, Lou. ~ Gee

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Gee

I'm glad that you are not offended , love ya loads

Lou

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Jayne

Glad that you liked it.

lou

magics02

13 years 9 months ago

That naked biker is??

Hmmm now who could this possibly be Lou? I like it and the picture that comes to mind wow what a show the biker gives to all at the parade. lol
Sorry to have missed your chat. Let me know next time okay when you will be hosting the chatting room. Best of wishes also in your new job assignments.

That naked biker is that Geez? Lord knows I will have to interrogate him in the chat room. On the darkside riding a bike stark naked. Hmmmm some daring devil if it is him. Smiles for miles:)

Great day to you Lou

Mona
xox