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Nov 06, 2017
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NAKED Trees (November Contest)
Why do you choose to take that form?
Oh you this beautiful thing!
What you seed, are beautiful and attractive.
But we humans are disrespectful.
Only if you could cover them!
But you choose to uncover them
You not greedy like the humans
What a unique being you are!
Why that form, I ask again?
Or maybe you choose to disguise like that
You really don’t look NAKED to me.
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Kent
7 years 7 months ago
yeah! the secret the trees
yeah! the secret the trees choose to keep to their self
lovedly
7 years 7 months ago
human beings shed many skins
but only trees have yearly rings
ours we give to our
lovely lovings
scribbler
7 years 7 months ago
Hello
Why take that form? It has always amazed me how the random growth of twigs and limbs still co-ordinates to make a thing of beauty. Good luck in contest and please put (November contest} next to tile to make it easier for monthly judge to spot.......stan
Kent
7 years 7 months ago
ok. thanks alot
ok. thanks alot