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Nov 09, 2012
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THE NAME GAME
"What's in a name?"
If Carolina wears a caribina
and Charlotta has got a
car
Will Phillip pass the
stirrups and Matt
his hat?
Why does Wycliffe
need his handcuff
and Gracie need a lift?
Will that be too
much for Smith
If Sally eats
the pith?
Can Heather find
the feather in
her pillow for
little Willow?
What's in a name?
By evidence
no substance
and that's a real shame!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: A piece of absurdity, but fun on the tongue with the assonance!
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Roscoe Lane
12 years 8 months ago
Yes fun,
Yes fun on the tongue, and nicely written. Regards Roscoe..
BettyBuff
12 years 8 months ago
Thanks Roscoe
I realised that I'd written a few heavy themed and dour writes...it was time to lighten up and have a play with sound!
'Betty'
Seren
12 years 8 months ago
Dear 'Betty'
I loved your little bit of nonsense gave me a smile had to giggle and it rolls right off the tongue, I have missed you !! shock and awe have returned ;)
I will go back to the next poem in your list and see what else you been up to
love n hugs JC xxx
BettyBuff
12 years 8 months ago
Just limbering up...
The muse is returning...I'm still crafting...but i've got a lot to say. I always found your work inspirational. I love your writes.
Ells x
Seren
12 years 8 months ago
I am in the same boat I haven
I am in the same boat I haven't been able to write what I want, every now and then I can but I have been so bloody busy, its good now I dont go back to study till Feb
we are back now lol this is gonna be fun :P
hugs~JC
scribbler
12 years 8 months ago
Belated welcome to asylum lol
A humorous description that people make the name not the reverse. So keep on writing and keep on thinking lol........stan