Nature and Him

YOU LOVE nature
more than you do a woman
yet I am glad
you they summon,
to enjoy the bountiness,
the glory
the fiery story
composed by Almighty

He hasn't wasted a time life
in eternity
creating
destroying
recreating humanity
along with it naturality
and
as you call it poetry
I say tis a mystery....
why man runs after

power and money

the use of which is just limited
yet leaves the world of nature unexposed
in dreams distant I suppose....
perhaps he may stumble at the most
seeking solace at the altar of salvation
will he be by then
A ghost!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

emeka ozurumba

11 years 2 months ago

very rhythmic balance and i

very rhythmic balance and i loved, your model of conveyance impeccable the theme

emeka ozurumba

11 years 2 months ago

dear loved

pls can we get to our seminar forum where we are to write a joint poem , please can you choose a topic and write your version, then when i write mine together we will edit it , time is of essence

loved

11 years 2 months ago

THANKS

let me know
what you want me to write about
I am an off the cuff poet
knowing only free verses
no poetic nuances

by now all know my uniquity
you too now do
ask raj or Ian
or Stan

alidzain

11 years 2 months ago

loved

Man seeks power and money
for reasons that vary
many are greedy for self-consumption
believing they promote their ascendance
others want them to aid others
to paint life in meaningful colours
but you and i know, my friend
none of them will last
if only they return to nature
i believed they will be happier
for it will teach them Balance
peace and harmony in abundance
it will tell them that we need one another
to create a beautiful future

Alid