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May 29, 2022
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Necrophil...
Necrophil for that dead-end feeling!
Does your husband love the feeling of cold skin?
Do you want to feel like a corpse?
Take Necrophil!
It slows your heart and puts you in a trance
take two tablets and a cold shower
by the time you're ready
your husband will be HOT!
Necrophil is the latest trend
Of course you want to be the best fantasy you can be!
Does your husband get the cold shoulder from you?
Does he like it?
Try Necrophil now!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I wrote this after seeing a documentary about all the drugs we take for our ills. ~ Geezer. .
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
3 years 1 month ago
Can oldys take it safely
roaming corpse
they are as it is
a chance you give
Geezer
3 years 1 month ago
No...
this is for youngsters only, us older folk are too close to the edge as it is. We might not come back from a dose of Necrophil!
~ Geez.
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Candlewitch
3 years 1 month ago
hello Gezer,
you should go into advertising, you'll make a bundle! those kids will go for just about anything new. big bucks await you!
*hugs, Cat
Midge
3 years 1 month ago
Necrophil?
It's dead boring.