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Sep 19, 2015
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the neopoet he!
we wish you well
pain can be overcome
by composing poetry
as you do friend
i only hold your morale high up
upon the bamboo tree
some day
one day
we all have to go
why bamboo ?
ask me
its straight and unbreakable
like thee
so be happy
like me
I died in 1977
AND
came alive
just to read your indelible poetry
my mind has so been branded
by
thy poetry
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
9 years 9 months ago
hello Loved
I wonder who's this poem is written for, but it doesn't really matter. I liked the idea of the bamboo. I thought it's really a clever choice.
Thanks for sharing.
Geremia
9 years 9 months ago
:)
:)