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Apr 09, 2018
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Never go grey
Once a friend told me
Hi you are getting grey so early
I was just maybe in my thirties
here apply this cream
your hair won't ever turn white
note I said ''ever''
NEXT week I told him
all my hairs had fallen
see idiot
how right I was
I had said won't grow grey
ever
I am now a classified astrologer lol
some guy he ...
laughingly at the bridge table
dropped the creme
he bent down
and
fell without a scream
smiled away and said see ..lol
as he passed away ...
God,
saved some of his creme
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
7 years 3 months ago
lol
gotta read that fine print lol
lovedly
7 years 3 months ago
lol stan
yeah thanks